
Hey it's cookie here.I'm enjoying tafe emensly and love all the internet sites I've discovered.I'm going to put a poem on here that I wrote a while ago so let me know what u think - here goes
All anyone ever sees
Is a happy face that always smiles
No One sees the suffocating darkness
Nor the tears behind her eyes.
She's not even alive- She's just a corpse
But everyone thinks she is for she's walking around
Happy and Healthy- Smile on her face
And no one sees that inside she's hollowed out.
She has disease all over her
She can smell it rotting her flesh and bones
But she just paints a smile on her face
And hides the disease underneath her clothes.
She hates the filth and the stench
The ground in - caked on dirt
She knows she's evil and hideous
And has been since birth.
Nothing gets rid of it or makes it disappear
She is riddled with evil and disease
And the girl with a smile painted on her face
Is all that anyone sees.
So that's it. It's not exactly happy chappy but it's mine so I hope someone likes it or can relate to it. Later cookie

OMG!! that was just wonderful i can totally relate! I think you are so brave for letting us all read it. you make me feel as though i am not the only one who feels those things! i thank you for your posting!
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