Wednesday, March 11, 2009


Hey it's cookie here.I'm enjoying tafe emensly and love all the internet sites I've discovered.I'm going to put a poem on here that I wrote a while ago so let me know what u think - here goes


All anyone ever sees

Is a happy face that always smiles

No One sees the suffocating darkness

Nor the tears behind her eyes.

She's not even alive- She's just a corpse

But everyone thinks she is for she's walking around

Happy and Healthy- Smile on her face

And no one sees that inside she's hollowed out.

She has disease all over her

She can smell it rotting her flesh and bones

But she just paints a smile on her face

And hides the disease underneath her clothes.

She hates the filth and the stench

The ground in - caked on dirt

She knows she's evil and hideous

And has been since birth.

Nothing gets rid of it or makes it disappear

She is riddled with evil and disease

And the girl with a smile painted on her face

Is all that anyone sees.


So that's it. It's not exactly happy chappy but it's mine so I hope someone likes it or can relate to it. Later cookie

1 comment:

  1. OMG!! that was just wonderful i can totally relate! I think you are so brave for letting us all read it. you make me feel as though i am not the only one who feels those things! i thank you for your posting!

    Candi!

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