Friday, March 27, 2009

Hi everyone who follows my blog! I got my new laptop and it's awesome! Here's another poem

Go down to the valley
So dark and deep
Where truths are told
And secrets you must keep.
It's cold and windy down there
No sunshine to keep you warm
Where no good comes of anything
And all you know is harm.
A place where you're judged
It's a cold and desolate place
A place that you know is evil
For you haven't fallen from grace.
With a whisper of cold winter
And a breath of hot stinky air
Who knows where i'll end
But right now I'm stuck there.
From deep within the dark
You can hear the coldness' life
Freezing everything in it's path
Bringing no joy only strife.
A view of the world
So dark and bleak
Who knows what comes next
Who knows what we seek.
An emptiness so existant
So destructive and out of control
Maybe life would be simpler
If we could get out of this hole.

I know it's not very happy but I don't have many happy ones if any. I hope the people who read it enjoy it a little even though it's pretty depressing. Till next week see ya all later.

1 comment:

  1. beautifully written Piper i really hope you continue this work and explore all the themes of poetry it is such a beautiful way to convey what can not be said see you Wensday

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